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Flatten a few patches to remove a
few texture patches. Too much texture is distracting.
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How does one identify the season
change/ transition spaces?
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Balance between illustration and
information design through clarity in the activities happening in the map.
Text
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Having text in the map to support
the visuals can be looked at. A separate form can become unnecessary. The text
will also help the viewers to understand/communicate information and make it
look more like a map.
Form:
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A simple mechanism like rotation will
be interesting to play around in the form.
Presentation skills
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To spend more time talking about
the stage the project is at, then the process while presenting.
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Could have started by sharing the
final work first and also a quick introduction where your own personal interest
lies in this project.