Thursday Feedback sesssion

1. Use the grid to show the layers once everything is mapped and rendered which will then add elements of map and guide the viewer
2. The need of text in another form.
3. Use of vector is a good idea to show far away things.



Presentation

Begin the presentation where the project is at.
Introduction is a must and always speak as the project.

Work in progress

The grassland map,

Session2

Anu's Feedback

1. Making smaller connections(stories) in the whole narrative so that you can read the narrative in different ways
2. Probably no need for text on map


Presentation skills need to be improved. Brief introduction to the project and the client is a must.

Explorations

Explorations for the sky and the ground

Content

Feedback

Feedback from Sonali,

• Categorised the content

• Probably create personas for the target audience to understand:

1.  If the same circular structure can be converted into different forms 
2.  kind of information to offer for the different target audience

• Continue prototyping 

Work in Progress

Need to have a more simplistic style with lesser strokes and may be a simple vector to show the symbols, signs.
I realised that some facts/stories need explanation and hence another small form is necessary.
Focusing on the idea that this is map which is also the index while designing it, adds other layers of maps such as landmarks, nodes,  edges, paths and districts subtly in it.


Also, I was trying to play around with grids and how can I use the grids